Iris: I wish...

Tuesday, November 27, 2007

I wish…

This world only constituted of water, no land.

I wish…

There was no sun; the world would look amazing seeped in darkness for 24 hours.

I wish…

Chocolates would be calorie free.

I wish…

Pain would be sold as a drug.

I wish…

I could dig my feet into snow.

I wish…

I lived on Pluto instead of on the Earth.

I wish…

The clouds would be red instead of blue.

I wish…

There would be no summer, only winter.

I wish…

I could turn back time.

I wish…

I was 7 years old.

I wish…

I was my MPD.

I wish…I wish…I wish.

Ritwika said...: The last line. I think you did it unconsciously, but it's a thought. Novel.

Also like "... Pain would be sold as a drug." Try phrasing it better, though- think that might help it sound even better.

Have already told you the rest.; November 28, 2007 at 11:02 PM
Dyaus Spes said...: Wishes are surreal but fair. Wish it was poetic. Good one though; December 1, 2007 at 3:09 PM